literature

Letting You Go

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It was a warm summer night
Blankets tangled around me
Your eyes were all I wanted to see
But now it's just me
Holding myself tight

We were out in the dark
Not sure where we were
But I'm sure you were thinking of her
That sure didn't stop me
Didn't stop that spark from happening

I still remember the taste of your lips
How your hands in mine were perfect fit
That was the best night
The night I'll never forget
It was the night we had our very first kiss

I saw you again
It was a winter night
I'm sure you think it wasn't right
But the thought still remains
Was all we did really in vain?

We were out in the park
Still holding hands
What happened to our plans?
You sure left your mark
And once again we created a spark

I still remember the taste or your lips
How your hands in mine were perfect fit
That was the best night
The night I'll never forget
It was the night we had our forbidden kiss

I wish I could see you
On this summer night
Maybe then things would be alright
But I know we're through
Yet somehow I just cant forget you

Walking out in the dark
Just wishing you were there
But you disappeared in thin air
Still, I stand in the park
Where we had our first spark

I still remember the taste of your lips
How your hands in mine were perfect fit
That was the best night
The night I'll never forget
It was the night we had our very last kiss

Now it's time to let you know
I'm letting your memory fly away
I'll hide my dismay
Standing out in the snow
Finally letting you go
I actually kinda like this one. I might back it into a song. but I have no comments on it...
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comments and critique are always appreciated and welcome

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I was thinking how this could be a great song and then I read your comment. :D Good job. :clap: