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Sunlight seeping through leaves just beginning to bloom
A small breeze makes the shadows dance upon my skin
Back pressed up again his soft, warm chest
Hand tracing his jaw line softly
His eyes reach mine slowly
Those deep, dark brown eyes
Just looking at them makes me smile,
Makes the butterflies flutter in my stomach
Drawling his attention away from the children,
He looks down at me, a smile spreads across his lips
Lips so red like a cherry freshly picked
I never get tired of the warm, sweet taste

Reaching up he holds my hand against his cheek
Captivated in his gaze, eyes locked on his
The amazing face of an angel is what I see
Lowering his face just inches away from mine,
Cheeks still go red after all this time
His breathing is slow and calm unlike my heart
I hear it pounding in my ears but he doesn't notice
Moving even closer, out noses touch now
His breathing becomes uneven,
Matching my attempts at breathing evenly
Closing my eyes, he lays his forehead on mine
In the background I hear laughter, birds singing their song
A smile forms on my lips as my eyes open to the sight of his face
Those dark circles looking down on my softly,
Following my every move

Slowly I move my other hand to his face,
Putting it on the other side
His arms lock around me tightly, afraid I'll try to move away
Looking into each others eyes, I see happiness
The sunlight his his face perfectly, making him glow
A butterfly above his head fluttering about
Not nearly as quickly as the ones inside my chest
Looking back at him, our eyes met once more
This time there's no hesitation,
He moves in so there's no space between us
Our lips met in a soft tender kiss, everything else fades away
All I hear is our breathing and my heart beat like mad
Wrapping my arms around his neck, he holds my waist
Nothing could be more perfect then this very moment
His lips are warm and inviting, taste so sweet this spring morning
I never want his lips to leave mine but I know they will

Pulling away slowly, my eyes open to his smile
There's no doubt in my mind, he's happy
The way he's smiling and wont stop looking at me,
I know he's in love
Leaves spin around us but we pay them no mind
Nothing captivates me like his eyes and wonderful smile
I hear footsteps coming towards, we both look up slowly
Running full speed is the children and dog
They both come jumping in my lap
Hair wind blown, and skin covered in dirt
I still find them the cutest things on the planet
Looking up at him, I find his eyes watching them lovingly
Smile on my face, I hold them close to me
My favorite place to be is right here with my family
©2009 *Broken101
:iconbroken101:

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I need inspiration and he told me to write about my special place. I go there everytime I need to calm down. I love it there. so here it is...I know it's kinda crappish but I sorta like it
Comments and critiques would be greatly appreciated
enjoy ^^

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

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:iconisobel-theroux:
Lovely :clap:

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That night, at the cemetary when I introduced you to my mom and dad, you told me that I would never be alone, that my mom would always be watching over me. We're in each others hearts,Clark.I will always be with you.. no matter what. I love you.~Lana Lang
:iconbroken101:
thank you :) glad you like it

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:iconisobel-theroux:
Well, I'm glad you shared it. :)

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That night, at the cemetary when I introduced you to my mom and dad, you told me that I would never be alone, that my mom would always be watching over me. We're in each others hearts,Clark.I will always be with you.. no matter what. I love you.~Lana Lang
:iconapplechaoskiller:
AWW it's so beautiful hun :aww:

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"I stand alone to change this world, not to prove I'm the greatest, but to show everyone else hope and good still exist!"-AS

"I'm a fallen angel...I didn't fall cuz my wings got taken, I stayed cuz it's faster to save someone when ur on even ground"-AS
:iconbroken101:
you really like it? ^^

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:iconapplechaoskiller:
I really love it! ^^

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"I stand alone to change this world, not to prove I'm the greatest, but to show everyone else hope and good still exist!"-AS

"I'm a fallen angel...I didn't fall cuz my wings got taken, I stayed cuz it's faster to save someone when ur on even ground"-AS
:iconbroken101:
awww :) I wuv chu!!! :tighthug:

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:iconblondeonastick:
cute

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falling hurts less if you have people to catch you
:iconbroken101:
thankies ^^

--
Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3

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