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Nothing dulls the pain
Not even this knife
Your words are engraved upon my skin
You voice trapped in my memory
No matter how much I rip my skin,
Your words still remain
No matter how many times I lose my mind,
Your voice is still there

My body goes through the motions
But really I'm a thousand miles away
In your arms
Just like I always wanted to be
You lips meeting mine
Then I hear someone calling me name
I realize it's not you
That I'm only dreaming again

I can't pretend anymore
I break down
My heart shatters
I know you're no longer mine
That you'll never be mine again
I am forced to remember
Remember what we had
What we could've had
Something I can no longer have
But someone I will always long for...

You and me...
why does this hurt so much..?
enjoy...
comments and critiques always welcomed and appreciated

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:iconemokiller99:
Emokiller99 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
Very good! You have a great talent! ^^
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009  Student Writer
glad you think so
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Emokiller99 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
^^
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Shiado-Liver Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009  Hobbyist
Sounds just like how my life is now....it tough too...
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:iconbroken101:
Broken101 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009  Student Writer
I'm sorry to hear that :hug:
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Shiado-Liver Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist
yea...
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angelwbrokenwings Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
So real. So touching. God can I relate! Beautifully written.:teddy::iconkissingplz:
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:iconbroken101:
Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
thank you. sorry you can :hug:
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zero-empathy Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
*open your chest, takes your heart and gives you mine* It endures more.
:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

we love you I will always be here to hug you :huggle:
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Writer
I don't want a heart anymore
having a heart means you can feel
feeling means getting hurt
hurting means being like this
so no thanks...
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zero-empathy Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
smart as always =p

I will take yours and save it next to mine and when you are ready I will give it back ^___^

how about this !! :)
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Writer
if you can find it. go right ahead
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zero-empathy Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
oohhhh yeaaa I feeeeeeeeeeel it :heart: warm and beating hard :tighthug:

you fill me with .... life I guess.

hontoni arigatou for your existence :aww:
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Writer
though I wish I didn't exist
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zero-empathy Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
XD will never come true XD

I will eat you up this way X3 don't let me start glompin you *shuffles your hair* *bites your neck* halloween infection =p

naa really, *hugs you tight, rubs your back* if i only i can touch you and hug you for real.
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Writer
haha thanks
I wish you could hug me too. I really need a hug right now
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