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Hair soaked
Clothes drenched
It almost feels like I'm in the rain
But I'm curled up in my bed
Without you
You're the whole reason I'm like this
Or is it really my fault?

Eyes never dry
Body never stops shaking
Stop telling me lies
That you still love me
That you'll come back
We'll be together again
Because you know what?
That's just bullshit

I've hard those one too many times
And I'm not going to believe you
Not now
You broke my heart
Can you hear it shattering?
Oh wait...I forgot you can't
You no longer care to hear
My words fall upon deaf ears
As well as my screams

I tried to make you stay
But you just turned your back
Said we'd be better this way
You're like everyone else
Why did I trust you?
Let you in?
Why did I believe you were different?

My eyes burn along with my lungs
Holding on to the last jagged piece
The last piece I have of you
It cuts deep into my skin
But I only hold it tighter
Letting the blood trickle down
Falling into the puddle of what I used to be

Maybe they were right all along
Maybe I should've have listened to them
Not this broken thing
Not my heart
It knows nothings
And they always seem to be right
So why listen to something that lies?
Why listen to you?

Don't believe that I'm going to be ok
That I'll be happy now
I told you once and I'll tell you again
Without you I am nothing
I can prove that to you now

I'm nothing more than memories
A faint cry in the night
I can no longer be the person I was
She only exists in the past
You took her with you
As well as the fragments of my heart

So now I have nothing
But I don't mind
For soon I will be nothing
No longer breathing
No longer feeling pain
If I could say one last thing
My last words to you would be
I only wish I could have saved you...
Saved us
but it's a bit too late for wishes...isn't it..?
enjoy..
comments and critiques always welcomed and appreciated

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:iconmonik10sushilover:
monik10sushilover Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
Woaw...you rooock:| this poems are so..perect..i just love them..tthey touch my heart
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Student Writer
awww thanks. haha perfect?
don't think so but thanks. glad you do
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Emokiller99 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
Very good! I could read it all day and still love it!
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:iconbroken101:
Broken101 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009  Student Writer
haha well thank you
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Emokiller99 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
No prob!
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MellyBURSTOFbayum Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
I like the tone.

;D
Everything's going to be alright.
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:iconbroken101:
Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
thanks
yea. can't believe that
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MellyBURSTOFbayum Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
Blah.
I tried.
But trust me, things will change for the better.
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:iconbroken101:
Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
kk
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hearts-in-the-sky Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Artist
this is so beautiful...
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