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Hair soaked
Clothes drenched
It almost feels like I'm in the rain
But I'm curled up in my bed
Without you
You're the whole reason I'm like this
Or is it really my fault?

Eyes never dry
Body never stops shaking
Stop telling me lies
That you still love me
That you'll come back
We'll be together again
Because you know what?
That's just bullshit

I've hard those one too many times
And I'm not going to believe you
Not now
You broke my heart
Can you hear it shattering?
Oh wait...I forgot you can't
You no longer care to hear
My words fall upon deaf ears
As well as my screams

I tried to make you stay
But you just turned your back
Said we'd be better this way
You're like everyone else
Why did I trust you?
Let you in?
Why did I believe you were different?

My eyes burn along with my lungs
Holding on to the last jagged piece
The last piece I have of you
It cuts deep into my skin
But I only hold it tighter
Letting the blood trickle down
Falling into the puddle of what I used to be

Maybe they were right all along
Maybe I should've have listened to them
Not this broken thing
Not my heart
It knows nothings
And they always seem to be right
So why listen to something that lies?
Why listen to you?

Don't believe that I'm going to be ok
That I'll be happy now
I told you once and I'll tell you again
Without you I am nothing
I can prove that to you now

I'm nothing more than memories
A faint cry in the night
I can no longer be the person I was
She only exists in the past
You took her with you
As well as the fragments of my heart

So now I have nothing
But I don't mind
For soon I will be nothing
No longer breathing
No longer feeling pain
If I could say one last thing
My last words to you would be
I only wish I could have saved you...
Saved us
but it's a bit too late for wishes...isn't it..?
enjoy..
comments and critiques always welcomed and appreciated

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monik10sushilover Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
Woaw...you rooock:| this poems are so..perect..i just love them..tthey touch my heart
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Student Writer
awww thanks. haha perfect?
don't think so but thanks. glad you do
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Emokiller99 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
Very good! I could read it all day and still love it!
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009  Student Writer
haha well thank you
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Emokiller99 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
No prob!
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MellyBURSTOFbayum Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
I like the tone.

;D
Everything's going to be alright.
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
thanks
yea. can't believe that
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MellyBURSTOFbayum Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
Blah.
I tried.
But trust me, things will change for the better.
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
kk
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hearts-in-the-sky Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Artist
this is so beautiful...
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
thank you. I'm glad you thank so
and thank you for the :+fav: too
I really appreciate it
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hearts-in-the-sky Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2009  Student Artist
=) Anytime...I really love your work
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Maverick-14 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
You must have looked into my heart and read the words etched there. Thank you for sharing those words with us.
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Writer
no. I don't know where my heart is anymore. but it does talk to me. and that's how I write. I don't choose what I write or when I write it. that's up to my heart. but thank you for reading it
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zero-empathy Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
so honest, that's what I love about you.

you put him in front of you and you just let your heart speak.

you are not like those popular writers these days they just think of cool stories and great words to rhyme.

you don't need that, your feelings reach the bottom of my heart every time :huggle:
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Writer
that's what I hate about me. far too honest.
sometimes that's good. but not in this situation. I have to pretend to be strong. because he doesn't care. let him go with a smile. even though I know he'd still leave even if I was crying my heart out
but that's what people want. what they like. great stories. things that rhyme. emotion doesn't matter to people.
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zero-empathy Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
that's what I will always adore about you ^^
and honesty never were a wrong choice, you are a better person than me ^^
you don't need to show him that you are strong, It doesn't matter like you said.
it's like this, you fall to learn how to stand tall again ^___^
he doesn't worth it anymore, I have this pic in my mind I would like to draw about you XD but it's so hard ... you will be happy with all the hands i see them given to you holding you tight :heart:

are they people, human anymore?? you know better than this ^^ :tighthug: keep it up dear Anna :blackrose:
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Writer
you adore that I hate myself?
eh I doubt I'm a better person
I guess I just want to be strong. though I'm not sure for exactly
yea...and what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger
I would argue with you...but I'm far to tired
maybe he's not worth it...but that's only because he's worth so much more
thanks..? I'll try
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zero-empathy Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
no I meant I will always adore your honesty ^^
yes you are, sure you are :nod:
being strong will make it easier to deal with life in general, but don't pretend to be strong in front of him .. he doesn't worth it.
and if you think he worth so much more, we will see about that in the future.=p

I can relate to that part, Tired. you are the same *XD srry talked to mah self*
but you still stand there, don't you :D

:thumbsup: GANBATTE :tighthug:
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
oh ok lol that makes more sense
if you say so
i can't be strong. not for him. not for me. I just need to not pretend for once. act how i really feel
i know for fact he's worth more. so yea...nothing to wait on there
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zero-empathy Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
you will make it ^____^

I will be here to witness that ^^ :tighthug:
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
yea ok
whatever you say
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Babay-Shawdow Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009
... You're writing always makes me so sad. I mean it's beautiful, but just makes me think, it really couldn't get worse. Look for the light!!
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Broken101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Writer
I'm sorry it makes you sad. but that's how I tend to write. beautifully tragic? that's what people tell me a lot.I'd look but I don't see the point anymore
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