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Ring on my finger
A smile on my face
We're no longer strangers
We now run the same race

I pull on the white dress
It sparkles in the light
I remember when I was a mess
Now I'm quite a sight

I say "I do"
Now I wait for your reply
You say "I do" too
In relief I sigh

I lay here in your arms
Your lips eagerly kiss mine
I know you would never put me in harm
For that I trust you and I know I'll be fine
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I get down on one knee
I see the sparkles in your eyes
I ask you to marry me
You nod your head and start to cry

The tux fits just right
Now I must wait for you by the stairs
My eyes search for you in the crowd so light
I see you in your dress and you're too beautiful to bare

You say "I do"
A smile takes place of a nervous line
Then I say "I do" too
You are forever mine

Holding you in my arms
My lips meet yours
Dear, you have so much charm
Together we will soar
©2008-2009 *Broken101
:iconbroken101:

Author's Comments

Well I was wearing a big ring on my wedding finger today and it has real diamonds on it so...people thought i was engaged or something. That made me laugh and it gave me the idea for this poem.
The first part is from the girls point of view and the second part is from the guys point of view.
I hope you like it, 'twas rather fun to make

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:iconnightghost37:
This is really beautiful, good job.
I luve it!
:iconprincessiwanna:
omg this is soooo beutiful i was like i want to get married now but no i am too young for that but we can all wish for our happy day to come!!

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If even a day should go by when I don't say I love you, may never a moment go by with out you knowing that I do

To the one i can never say "i love you" to
:icon04me:
cool:heart: love both aprts :)

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:blackrose:you only have one life so insted of living in darkness and shame go out and live like theres no tomorrow:rose:
:iconbroken101:
thankies :rose:

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:iconbroken101:
thankies. yeah i kinda want to get married now too xD

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:iconbroken101:
Thank you very much :blushes:

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:icon04me:
u welcome:blackrose:

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:blackrose:you only have one life so insted of living in darkness and shame go out and live like theres no tomorrow:rose:
:iconbroken101:
which do u like better if u don't mind me asking? i'm curious

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:icon04me:
to be honest a bit the girls part but, another bit the boys oint of you because you just discribe so much its like if i someone were there actualy seing it:)

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:blackrose:you only have one life so insted of living in darkness and shame go out and live like theres no tomorrow:rose:

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